20210215: Add changes suggested by Susan

5 files changed, 23 insertions, 30 deletions

diff --git a/Activities.tex b/Activities.tex
index 2dde76b..2b48689 100644
--- a/Activities.tex
+++ b/Activities.tex
@@ -1,15 +1,14 @@
 % Feel free to chop this out to reach one page.
 \section{Other Activities}\label{sec:Other_Activities}
 \paragraph{Triangle Fraternity, Armour Chapter}\label{par:Triangle-Armour}
-\subparagraph{House Manager}\label{par:House_Manager}
-Member of Chapter Executive Board.
-Responsible for keeping facilities in livable condition.
-Responsible for organizing both regular House duties and pre-semester work week.
-
-\subparagraph{Fileserver/Website Administrator}\label{par:Triangle_ServerAdmin}
-Maintain chapter website.
-Replaced outdated Linux server with new FreeBSD-based system.
-Determine requirements and identified budget, obtained funds from National organization, and replaced hardware.
+\subparagraph{House Manager, Chapter Executive Board and Fileserver/Website Administrator}\label{par:Triangle-Eboard}
+\begin{itemize}[noitemsep]
+\item Keep facilities in livable condition.
+\item Organize regular House duties and pre-semester work week.
+\item Maintain chapter website.
+\item Replaced outdated Linux server with new FreeBSD-based system.
+\item Determined requirements and budget, obtained funds from National organization, and replaced hardware.
+\end{itemize}
 
 \paragraph{\href{https://github.com/NixOS/nixpkgs}{\upshape\texttt{nixpkgs}} Contributor}
 Redesigned the \href{https://www.gnu.org/software/octave/index}{GNU Octave} definition to allow for declarative installation and management of add-on libraries.
diff --git a/Education.tex b/Education.tex
index b2ca674..d683eb8 100644
--- a/Education.tex
+++ b/Education.tex
@@ -1,17 +1,11 @@
 \section{Education}\label{sec:Education}
-\paragraph{\textit{M.S.\ Computer Engineering, Specializing in Computer Systems Software}, \IIT{}}\label{MS-CE}
-Expected 2022.
+\paragraph{\IIT{}}\label{par:IIT}
+\textit{M.S.\ Computer Engineering, Specializing in Computer Systems Software}, Expected 2022.
 
-\paragraph{\textit{B.S.\ Computer Engineering}}\label{par:BS-CE}
-\begin{itemize}[noitemsep]
-\item \IIT{}
-  Expected 2022.
-  \textbf{GPA}: $3.962$
-\item Study Abroad: \LTH{}
-  Lund, Sweden. 2019 --- 2020
-\end{itemize}
+\textit{B.S.\ Computer Engineering}, Expected 2022. \textbf{GPA}: $3.962$
+
+\LTH{} Lund, Sweden. 2019 --- 2020 (Study Abroad)
 
-\vspace{-4pt}
 \subsection{Course Work}\label{sec:Course_Work}
 \vspace{5px}
 % If applying for particular position, pick and choose 1-3 classes to describe in depth
diff --git a/Experience.tex b/Experience.tex
index c0b29e4..45b9e7e 100644
--- a/Experience.tex
+++ b/Experience.tex
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 \section{Professional Experience}\label{sec:Professional_Experience}
 \begin{center}
   \begin{tabular}[h!]{p{11cm}r}
-    {\large \textbf{Intern, \href{https://mazarineventures.com}{Mazarine Ventures}}}, {\footnotesize Chicago, IL} & {\small\textsc{Jul 2020 --- Aug 2020}} \\
-    \emph{Technical Specialist} & {\small\textsc{May 2019 --- Aug 2019}} \\
+    {\large \textbf{\href{https://mazarineventures.com}{Mazarine Ventures}}}, {\footnotesize Chicago, IL} & {\small\textsc{Jul 2020 --- Aug 2020}} \\
+    \emph{Technical Specialist --- Intern} & {\small\textsc{May 2019 --- Aug 2019}} \\
   \end{tabular}
 \end{center}\vspace{-12px}
 \begin{itemize}[noitemsep]
@@ -18,8 +18,8 @@
 % Position and company should be the 2 big things, dates are second priority
 \begin{center}
   \begin{tabular}[h!]{p{11cm}r}
-    {\large \textbf{Intern, \href{https://www.ecolab.com/nalco-water}{Nalco Water, an Ecolab Company}}}, {\footnotesize Naperville, IL} & {\small\textsc{May 2018 --- Aug 2018}} \\
-     \emph{Technical Manual Specialist} & {\small\textsc{Dec 2017 --- Jan 2018}} \\
+    {\large \textbf{\href{https://www.ecolab.com/nalco-water}{Nalco Water, an Ecolab Company}}}, {\footnotesize Naperville, IL} & {\small\textsc{May 2018 --- Aug 2018}} \\
+     \emph{Technical Manual Specialist --- Intern} & {\small\textsc{Dec 2017 --- Jan 2018}} \\
   \end{tabular}
 \end{center}\vspace{-12px}
 \begin{itemize}[noitemsep]
@@ -32,14 +32,14 @@
 
 \begin{center}
 \begin{tabular}[h!]{p{11cm}r}
-    {\large \textbf{Barista, \href{https://www.starbucks.com}{Starbucks}}}, {\footnotesize Geneva, IL} & {\small\textsc{May 2015 --- Aug 2017}} \\
+  {\large \textbf{\href{https://www.starbucks.com}{Starbucks}}}, {\footnotesize Geneva, IL} & {\small\textsc{May 2015 --- Aug 2017}} \\
+  \emph{Barista} & \\
   \end{tabular}
 \end{center}
 \begin{itemize}[noitemsep]
-\item Reported to store manager
-\item Made handcrafted beverages
-\item Maintained clean facilities that exceeded health inspections
-\item Responsible for training new employees on drink creation and standards.
+\item Handcrafted beverages
+\item Cleaned facilities to exceed health inspections
+\item Trained new employees on drink creation and standards
 \end{itemize}
 
 %%% Local Variables:
diff --git a/Honors.tex b/Honors.tex
index f680f5e..d776d0a 100644
--- a/Honors.tex
+++ b/Honors.tex
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 \begin{tabularx}{1.0\linewidth}{l
   >{\raggedleft\arraybackslash}X}
   % \toprule
-  \IIT{} --- Dean's List & \textsc{2017 --- 2020} \\
+  \IIT{} --- Dean's List & \textsc{2017 --- Present} \\
   \IIT{} --- Camras Scholarship & \textsc{2017 --- Present} \\
   Batavia High School --- Highest Honor Roll ($>4.375$ GPA) & \textsc{2013 --- 2017} \\
   % \bottomrule
diff --git a/TeX_Output/Hallsby_Karl.pdf b/TeX_Output/Hallsby_Karl.pdf
index c1063e5..a6461c4 100644
--- a/TeX_Output/Hallsby_Karl.pdf
+++ b/TeX_Output/Hallsby_Karl.pdf